All Comments on 'Are You Asleep, Georgie?'

7.8

can be a pain in the ass. LOL

I think this story could have been in humor just as well.

I did not find it very hot, but it made me grin.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

Very entertaining story, but far from your best work. Could use a good proofing, too. ~Imp

A very interesting tale, and one that made me laugh out loud several times. :)

Well done Gauche! I was pleasantly surprised with your entry. I don't think I have seen the word "fuck" used as many times, and as well, as you did in that one paragraph.

Good luck!

Salty and a little sour. Like pickled lemons. You know that first bite sets your teeth on edge, but later, it's enjoyable.

Am I the only one who sees the humour in this story?

Hey there, Gauche. Even though Incest/Taboo isn't one of my favorite categories, I found myself reading until the end to see what would happen next. Good luck to you.