All Comments on 'Are You Man Enough?'

For a first submittal; much better than most. Would like to read more chapters in the future.

His massive cock came out of her mouth with a pop. Every cliche in the book.

either write the story or piss off.

i hate teasing!!!!

good start for a first timer,but please write more.

so,are you man enough to submint more chapters?????????????

yos

Tell us the rest.

Hopefully it is a heated encounter, or many heated encounters.

Something that helps him vent his frustrations.

You got 1 star for several reasons.

1. I hate supposed writers who only tell part of a story and insist people rate them well to finish it. Fuck that!

2. No originality in the story. As one other commented, every cliche.

3. Learn English! "What's a matter Bobby" whats a matter? well matter is the substance or substances of which any physical object consists or is composed

My ex husband had a big dick and left me for a younger women. Just the thought that some male is writing about a guy with a big dick having sex makes me so angry, I just have to criticize your spelling and grammar.

To the readers who have commented, thanks so much. I had the bulk of this story sitting around for the better part of a year but never submitted it. I wanted to make it longer first but never could get inspired. I wasn't trying to tease... just hoping that by going ahead and submitting, it would motivate me to finish the story and write the rest.

As for the user deisatru, you are an asshole for several reasons

1. I hate douchebags who overly criticize other authors' works when they themselves haven't written shit.

2. "What's a matter" is in quotes for a reason you idiot. It's dialect. I'm sorry if the CHARACTER in my story has grammar issues that bother you. Get a life. But before you do, please find what you feel are grammar errors that aren't in quotes and let me know what those are.

3. In your response, you had two sentence fragments, lacked ending punctuation in two other sentences, and misspelled "what's." So bite me.

I think he's man enough to fuck his step mother, but will he want to cuckold his dad?

It would make a very erotic story if he fucked her and knocked her up.

Hope to see more of the story soon, thanks

I'm guilty! What can I say? I thought "How is this writer going to make baseball blend into a sexual romp? Well, it didn't take me long to find out. Not only did you do it, but you did it masterfully. Congratulations! I gave it 5 stars. I couldn't believe that I was witnessing such talent in action. I wasn't going to comment on this story but I thought I would be doing you and myself a huge disservice if I kept my peace. Keep up the good work. Don't worry about the spelling. If the "spelling police" is all you have to worry about, then you'll do just fine. Art brings it's critics. There are a few that are not so friendly, and some that are. Bring on part II. Yes, you'll find some criticism for sure, but you just might find some more fans, too. Good luck!

I hope you write a follow up on this story with the step mother being taken by the pissed off step son.

Seriously a great story, hurry up and write part 2, it would be a shame if not a crime to continue this idea. Don't worry about the people bitching about your grammar, if it bothers you look for an editor. I'm sure there would be many people on the site who would be happy to help you.

I love this story the only thing that can make it better is more of it. please don't make me start bribing, cause I'll do it!

Sucks it ended that way.

Where is the rest of the story? Chapter 2 maybe?

The most unusual story of this type I have read. Since the son is 18, he will not have to tolerate his step mother much longer. Hopefully, he can live with his mother. Did not understand the father's actions in this story.