All Comments on 'Argument Ch. 02'

WHAT DECENT HUBBY WOULD WANT A WHORESLUT AROUND HIS CHILDRED,AND THAT WHAT SHE HAS BECOME.NO MAN WANT A DUMB WOMAN AS WELL AS A WHORE FOR A WIFE.SHE IS WHAT DOGS CHASE ATFER.

and I am sure that after she finds out it was Ed's fault for the new video, after she humiliates her husband by having sex with someone else in front of him (who will discover that he likes watching her have sex with other men), her and her husband Steve will go on with their marriage with her fucking everyone and him delightedly watching. What a great FANTASY.

There must be a template out there for authors to use to write these stories=wife cheats, husband finds out, husbands discovers he LOVES to watch other men fuck his wife, husband and wife live happily ever after. Very original.

Try reading the "Hildy" story by the Troubador before you post the next story. It deals with what is about to happen in a slightly different way.

It may very well be the DUMBEST story on this site. The idea that Steve could have set it up is so moronic that it would make ID4 look like a documentary.

Sure, the sex is hot, but if she thinks her hubby set this up, she isn't thinking beyond her own desires for orgies.

Her husband had no chance to set up the first event, and it looks more like Ed was the instigator of the second.

Now she's going to screw up her final chances for her marriage by humiliating her husband. {sigh}

I kind of hope that her husband has already filed for divorce, and the papers arrive either during or just after this next round of debauchery.

....but what a silly story! The logic of it all is , well, ....absent, totally. Never mind, it's an enjoyable read

this is probably the dumbest story ever posted. No doubt this is going to be another forgiving wimp story.

This is by far one of the dumbest story lines I've ever read. She gets raped and instead of going to the police, has 'horny' memories of it. If her husband did set her up (can't see how he did) he's a total jerk and she's even worst. I live in Australia and I can only guess you are a cane toad. Believe me world, we are normal in Australia.

Sorry to be so negative, but this is a silly-ass story. Perhaps (as " the Moronic comment" has stated)if she is a "cane toad", old hubby has a machete and can dispatch with her rotten head. As a guy in the USA with several lady friends in Australia, I can attest the ladies (and guys) are not all crazy like these two.

The name for all those negative comment makers so far. Have none of you never heard of fantasy? Really, sometimes, the number of "anonymous" readers who pretend to believe that all stories are factual leaves me laughing. This story left me wanking.

You are teasing us!

You are being a nasty slut servicing all and sundry yet leave us hanging.

Nothing erotic here. Just s slut and a whore enjoying herself with her cuck hubby.

He still has the right attitude about the story -

But at this point it has stretched the bound of believability bit too far - Ed is a candidate for setting this up Steve only if he waited to see what she did and followed her then figured out a way to get the rape to happen and did the same with Ed and the theater but WOW talk about convoluted.

Late night murder mysteries can take lessons from you on how keep it confused.

For me it ultimately makes me think too hard about how the plot is weaving and not enjoying the potential of the sex scenes which are a bit short and cut off anyway??

Editorially - the use of language and images is good and there are few continuity issues or other distractions - talented -

I would have "Freshened up" her funky asshole with my tongue. Sucking her sphincter and tongue fucking her rectum until my jaws ached.

Fucking 9 years later and you still haven't thought up an ending?

WHY continue?! Why would anyone want to be married to this pitiful cunt?!

Finish it and I'll reevaluate and decide if I should log on to another computer and raise this score.

Finish it please