All Comments on 'Armored Love Ch. 10'

by Koco_Kyss

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missingmissmissingmissabout 14 years ago
Aaaaaaaaaaa koco

this has been a long time coming, worth the wait, i'm now gunna read the entire story.

honeybreehoneybreeabout 14 years ago
I really liked the series overall but thought the ending was kind of weak....

I must say, eveything did come full circle and this entire series was a great read but I thought the ending felt kind of flat, I was some how expecting more emotion from Bianca and Tony. Glad everything got resolved and it was a happy ending. KEEP up the good work and continue to write. Hopefully, you write a continuation of this story telling us how Tony's brother NIC is handling things...just a thought

PennLadyPennLadyabout 14 years ago
Hmmm

I liked this story, and lord knows I'm always good for a happy ending, but this did feel a bit rushed. Perhaps it's because, as you said, there were errors. I think, though, that the ending may be a bit too pat. Why did Juanita apologize? It seems completely out of character for her. I could believe Richard apologizing and attempting to make amends, but not Juanita. Anyway, i do hop you write more -- it's the only way to get better!

catman71catman71about 14 years ago
finally read the whole story

and it is great, i cannot wait for your next effort

LakergirlLakergirlabout 14 years ago
Good but

please seek out an editor or invest in a read aloud program. You will realize the blarring errors immediately. That was a significant distraction to the story. Seriously, missing articles ....... recheck.Hope the next adventure will see improvement.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WOW

I fount this story the other day started reading it last night and just finished it now it was wonderful and I really enjoyed reading it. I like these kind of stories and hope to be able to read more like them thanks so much for sharing I really liked these two a lot and hated to see their story end but oh well all good thing must come to and end they say!!

Koco_KyssKoco_Kyssabout 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I just wanted to thank everyone for their constructive comments on this story. The next effort will definitely have improvements:) Thanks again for the support. *Koco Kyss*

theirdretheirdreabout 14 years ago
Nick Story

I should consider doing a story about Nick Macato. he sound like he is so sexy.

missingit610missingit610almost 14 years ago
Good story...

Really enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Thank for sharing your talent great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Loved the Entire Series

Hang the typos-a great story is beyond that. Some need to stop being so anal.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 13 years ago

Wonderful, from beginning the ending...

Jujubee50Jujubee50about 13 years ago

Excellent story from start to finish!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
you are so awesome

Oh my goodness dudes you are so blessed with an amazing gift! You remind me of the author sherilyn kenyon. Write more stories plz and thanx hope you have a wonderful life!

haitiancutiehaitiancutieabout 13 years ago
that was amazing

even though Bianca mother was a bitch that was a great story ...write more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

that story was the shit and tonys mother get it gurl

SashasworldSashasworldalmost 13 years ago
Honestly

I know you got some stupid tough critisizims I just have to say

one: love the storyline

two: hated the grammar-- spellin I can take but I'm a grammar freak

third: Elana was the fuckin bomb

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Please write a sequel this story is to good to end it like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This is a great story to continue writing. Write a sequel for this story.

mrskelleymrskelleyover 12 years ago
Beautiful

Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I LOVED IT!!

1. A mind is a terrible thing to waste - disregard comments from those who can't even spell...lol

2. I loved the plot and the story line - yes there were grammatical errors, but it didn't take away from the story, for I knew what you meant when they were made.

3. Please continue writing...you do have a fan base now...we are waiting :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I loved it please make a sequel to this great story.

MsShaybabeMsShaybabeover 11 years ago
Wonderful story....

I waited to read the entire story before posting a comment....this was an amazing story. I hope you write a sequel or something. Please keep up the good work...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

really good story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Very Good Read!

All in all it was awesome, you just need an editor. You should do Nic's story next!

TrellyWellDoItWellTrellyWellDoItWellalmost 11 years ago
I love it!!

This story was so good!!!!! I love it!!!! 5Stars!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Stumbled upon this story...

And I'm glad I did. This was a good story and while there were quite a few errors I was able to look them over because it was such a good story line. It did seem a little rushed at times but nice story. Keep writing.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago

I love you koco for writing this series

FwarkFwarkover 9 years ago
Wooow.

I'm reading this so late, but I'm glad I found it; and I only have one thing to say.

Holy shit.

This was amazing, like seriously. I love you for writing this, gahh. cx

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 9 years ago

Great read but how did she get pregnant within like a day?

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