All Comments on 'Art, Part Two Ch. 05'

Jerry in Washington State, USA - I like how you advance the story in this chapter. Heidi is an interesting character and I'm not sure how much Art can really trust her. But, as she said, it is up to him and her to get him back to normal size. It will also be interesting how Lisa reacts to their sex long term. I find your story very interesting but my main interest is hoping your ending will be Art returning to regular size with maybe just a bit larger body and penis to help make up for all he is gone through. I like Art as a character and a person and want him to have a happy ending.