All Comments on 'As It Should Be'

by Rex Siter

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mitchawamitchawaalmost 9 years ago
Innovative

A long interesting hook that drew me in like a large mouthed bass. His experiments and the doctor's gizmo were well chronicled. The sex scenes were were well done and believable. Linda's immediate interest and willingness is unusual in many stories like this, and her period extended the anticipation. The final sex scenes were in keeping with two people in love. Indeed the greatest sex organ is the brain. The ability to influence that brain is what all we men wish we had. The professor's gizmo won't be something I would refuse.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
absolutey right

,love is a need and when done right can have laughter because of positioning just right

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