All Comments on 'Ashley and Julia Ch. 01'

Hey Ashley, I wanna tell you that you did an excellent job writing that, I'm already wanting to read your next submission!!

Waiting impatiently for the promised continuation.

And with experiences like that you must have many others to relate. Don't keep us waiting!!

please find an editor who can help you polish the wording ... great story!

Great first time - hope you keep publishing.

I just started publishing here too - perhaps read one of mine & if you are interested, maybe we can provide feedback &/or help each other.

(If thats not something you are interested in, no problem - good luck & keep writing)

Love it!! Keep it up!! Need to hear how this story ends!!

Great first time story. Your descriptions made it very believable. It certainly got my attention and a mental and physical reaction. Write more please

Please make a second part like I really want to know what happens I'm dying to know this is so interesting and I would like if it continued.