All Comments on 'Ashley's Big Summer Vacation'

I thought this story was really good. It is complex but it moves and the action gets really hot. There is a lot going on here but it all makes sense and was enjoyable. Don't listen to the previous comments. This is fine

What a lovely summertime story. I enjoyed it all and such a shame Uncle was caught before he seduced his other niece. Hope you have similar stories coming of beautiful, young women being seduced by older, balding, paunchy men. You do the nc/reluctant thing quite well.

love the story brilliant writing. reading this was so very exciting. and horny. hope there's more to cum from you.

There is some real gold in what you've done here; I really hope you provide us with some more to enjoy.

great story, good flow, and good idea behind it, simply a fucking good story

I really was enjoying your story, until you started to abuse the girl, with your hole hand and her ass.. sorry...

Very well done I enjoyed it a lot. I think Barry was a little too old, it made the story a little too creepyvat some points, which made them unenjoyable. But otherwise it was great. And I loved the ending with her getting revenge, although he would have been in jail for quite a while.

A nice tale of a summer not-quite-romance, with some really stimulating moments.

I found this story to be a great read and would recommend it everyone. Not surprisingly over 100,000 people have already clicked the story open.

An entrant in the Summmer Loin' contest it's already an early favorite to win an A.I.R. AWARD.

Good work! Please read, vote and comment on it. jrs esq.

juvenile, poorly written, not worth the time to read