All Comments on 'Asmodeus - Demon of Lust: Pt. 02'

It was really good and sexy ;) sooo yeah keep writing more :)

It's good to see an update for you.

I love this story and it just keeps getting better. His love and tenderness with her is just so sweet. A tender Demon, go figure, lol. Can't wait for more, thanks.

This is a great story!!!! He showed her so much love during her first time....love it!!! Can't wait for more.

Great second chapter! I've been checking everyday for your new post. I'm thankful that you were able to get this to us so quickly but the chapter seems a bit short. :( but it could just be me being greedy ;)

It is warm in here. I'll just go take a shower, now. Try to cool off.

Cant wait for the next one! Update soon!!!

Thank you for the second part. I'm seriously in LOVE with Asmodeus! His personality and the very way he connects/bonds with her is just breathtaking and ugh Words cannot explain! I hope you continue to add more!!

Xoxo,

Nightingale

I love, love, LOVE reading comments! It was purely because of the comments from part one that I wrote the second part so fast. Sorry that it's not as long but I literally wrote it in about 3 nights where as part one took weeks! I'm so happy to see that people like my work, because I like writing :) I am planning a part 3, but I've got exams coming up soon so it will probably be uploaded in November. Until then, Asmodeus bids you all "Soon, my dear ones..." Happy reading!

wow steele, that was so hot! I love how you use words to describe feelings, thoughts and an act that has been retold over and over again! You most definetly breathed new life into the act of lovemaking told in every story here! EXELLENT JOB! can't wait to read chapter 3.

Love the way You describe everything, it makes it feel so real! Can't wait for the next part!

Keep them coming!

I love this part just as much as I love the 1st one, omg. I can feel my heart melting. >u< Can't wait for more!

This only gets better. You had better keep writing--the rest of us can hardly wait!

I have already sent a private comment to 'Kat of Steel'...but I thought (now that I have discovered how to!) put a public comment...these are two great stories..the first does keep you 'hanging'...but the second is lovely! Talented lady...and we all want her to write more and more..hang the exams!

Where's the thrid chapter? I love this series, and was hoping to see more

i am i love wheres the next chapter!!!!!!!!

Hi everyone! Im so sorry for the delay, i know i said it would be up a month ago but its very long so far, longer than part one and not ready yet. Unfortunately i can only continue working on it in january as i am away on holiday, very far from home without my laptop. Never fear though, i hope the longer chapter will be worth the wait when i finally get it uploaded. Cheers, Steelkat

Hello everyone, thanks for all the faves, comments and support. If you don't know already, part 3 is up and you can find it via my profile. Cheers, Steelkat

The chapters are much too short. If they were longer it would be much easier to get into the story, but because of how short it is reading it isnt much fun

WURS honey, before you criticise the length of my chapters, why don't you try writing your own first because the last time I checked, 20,000 words are better than zero

I had no trouble getting into this story. Great job, I can't wait to read more.

I think WURS there is the only one complaining about the length. Ignore him SteelKat, keep doing what you're doing! Your work is amazing.

OMG that was amazing!!!!

Best part for me, not separating after they came and how he dragged her on him!!! that gave me the chills!!!

So happy there are more chapters for me to read !!!!

Great work!!!!

This story is right up my alley. I’m loving it. You have a way with words.

This story is written so well. It has me so giddy to read more like some teenager. It is on my top faves now

Absolutely beautiful! I love the details and sexual tension that builds.