All Comments on 'At Breanna's Insistence'

Another home run from one of Lit's masters. Hot and smart and compelling. Bravo!

The author is one of the best story tellers Literotica has. Again and again he puts out stories the are of superior quality, fun to read, and very ertotic. Please keep entertaining us with your stories!!

story. Wonderful! Better than wonderful!!!!!!

the story was very exotic, wish I was Breanna

Thanks for this enjoyable and smooth tale. Good to have you back.

Thank You

nice sex scene but... it got REALLY boring half way through, there were not enough conflicts in the story

You show flexibility and empathy in your writing that proves the >90% Hot ratings in your stories is not a fluke.

Since we are the same age, it's nice to see someone write as if we aren't dead. That maybe the best part of your writings to me.

Look forward as always to your next story.

I liked your story very much. Life sometimes has no conflicts.

Keep it up.

A beautifully written love story that is filled with sweet sex and erotic love scenes, and yet such a soft sweet love story.

Well done !

A very enjoyable story to read.

Thanks for the great read...

One of the best written stories that I've read. So much passion and sensuality. Great technique and fantasy rolled into one.

As a teen I used to hunger for older men.Now at age 30 I am married to my 53 year old hottie who is the best lover I have ever had.It's true bliss.I can relate to this story.Not just the amazing sex but that amazing connection that two people can have.Like every time you make love it feels like the first time.Nothing can compare to it.The excitement never tires or goes away.This story had wonderful detail.Better than those romance novels I just can't get into.It's not just about sex but the want and need to touch and be touched by someone that it sends shivers down your spine.This story captured the intensity of sexuality.I love reading older men/younger women stories but some are just about a one time hookup.This one addressed what happens after the climax.

I love the whole fantasy come true effect however I found the ending to lack some luster. Not to mention that it did end abruptly, otherwise job well done!

I love it not only for the well-described sex, but also the true, human emotion. I couldn't have crafted a better ending than the one you did. Readers who thought it was a weak ending weren't emotionally attached to your story, in my opinion. ('Course, being a DOM, I related to your professor.)

I'll be reading more of your stories. They're right up my alley.

That was a truly magnificent read. Just also magnificent was the reaction to the super pill. I presume it was part of your imagination.

Highly impressive, twisty with some fun kink, former students getting with the teacher lusted for years later is pretty cool especially the reverse female student with male teacher. The dragging out part by Breanna was kind of hard to take but females do what they want when they want and she was getting serviced regularly. LOL

Great story my first read here. I apologize for the 1 star rating, I tried to correct it but couldn't. Should have been 4!!! Thanks!!

have often fantasised about getting together with some of my former pupils especially now some are nearing 40.....would be so good as they have matured in to lovely women....this shows it could be possible...well one can dream....a great story and I'm sure it does happen.......

One of the very best stories I have read. Great work.

The start, middle and ending. Pretty much everything I would want from a story like this.

This was a fantastic mix of kink, seduction, and a little bit of romance. Loved the pacing, writing, and content of the story itself. Great stuff, keep writing!

A wonderful story, simply wonderful.

Thank you very nice

High Five, well written, totally enjoyable.

A dream come true!

Much better than I expected and it was great to start.

Not at all what I would typically read, leading me to believe I may have shortchanged myself. Thank you for a thoroughly enjoyable experience.

I truly appreciate the consideration of age in this love story. Thank you for making the subject come alive and taking us all through the life after 50. Sex and Life are inextricably linked and I am glad you provided a story relating that.

well there is a topic and title if someone wants to take it up.

there are many types of love/sex,

But the best to me is when it is an extension of love

I have been stalked on this site who did not like one of my comments

Her foul mouth and manner suggesting I should go kill myself

because I came down hard on bra burning bitches who control their

significant other.

well so be it I am going to keep literotica mail blocked a while longer.

In the meantime go find Curt Shilling's response to twitter thugs about their remarks about his daughter

In less than 4 hours he had the names and information all about every one who spouted off.

Sorry this is way off track but I happen to side with Curt Shilling. so ask me if I give a rats ass

back to the story--the author has a very good of today's old men and young ladies.

must be an old fart like me

Cock in one hand jerking and crying at the end. Damn...

I have read many of your stories and they are truly wonderful! More than just fucking and sucking (although that's terrific too!). This writers' stories have heart and soul. Magnificent writer!!

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Truly one of the better stories on here. Who wouldn't dream of finding a soul-mate, and a lover, regardless of age! Life would be great!

thanks for the entertainment.

and the grins

Am in my "late seventies", have a mid fifties year old mate these past six years. Her libido nearly died at menopause and, despite all meds and aids, except for infrequent occasions, vaginal sex is uncomfortable and orgasms for her not possible.

We thank our Maker for giving us anal sex too. We both liked it before her menopause, but we have taken it to a whole new level now. EX: Sometimes with a vibrating egg in the vaginal tract as well.

Mr. Hellers brief anal scene with Lauren deserved a lot more description and narrative. And one should never even consider marrying a younger woman until he has taught her all the joys of anal.

A truly great story. No wonder its high on the top list.

Loved it!

You crafted a believable (ish) scenario with two young hotties. Great descriptions. I for one am not a fan of measurement induced arousal. Your just created sexy characters. My one disappointment was not having more daddy/daughter related interaction between Heller and Lauren. That would have been hot. But 5* nonetheless.

well does cheerleader come to wedding and does puck again and her pregnant as well?

Just reread this story. Just as good the second time as the first. The three way scene was super fucking hot. A followup story with the three of them on their wedding night would be awesome!!!

Excellent story. Would love more of the story with her pregnancy sex. And more with Lauren and maybe him impregnating her.

Keep writing.

To 'the scribe', Really enjoyed your fast moving story! Great plot and characters

devine. Thank you for the effort. jntiques

I am a 70+ man who was a teacher many years ago. Last summer I had a former female student contact me via FB and tell me that she has been trying to "find" me for a long time. Since I had her in middle school I have moved 4 times and so has she. We emailed each other and after a few emails we got really sexy with each other. I happened to be in her area on a trip 3 months later and we arranged to meet at a motel. We arrived and with in 15 minutes of arrival were in bed doing the nasty. She loves oral sex and I gave a whole lot of oral sex to her and she came many, many times. We vowed to meet again to get reacquainted.

I had a girlfriend once just like Breanna: irreverent, sardonic, straightforward, bisexual, busty and irresistible. We had so much sex we practically passed out. Actually she did once. Scared me at the time. So I really enjoyed your story.

I've known lots of women, but never heard one say 'fuck'. Maybe sluts talk that way, but most women aren't sluts.

This is my second read of this story. I loved it the first time. It put a very warm feeling in my chest. That was a few years ago. This time I got a chuckle as I finished. The warmth and joy are still there, possibly even stronger. This tale is definitely adult but it also carries so much genuine heart that it is truly one of my very most favorites. I've known a couple of ladies like these two. Unfortunately time and miles have come between us. Because of that this story has been a refreshing lift that many of us need. I offer my heartfelt thanks for this work.

So many fantasies in one short story.

Thanks

However, gratuitous use of the “f” word is unnecessary and only panders to readers who want all of their sexy stories to be dirty. But, in romantic context between educated characters in normal conversation it is common and out of place.

Still, 5***** for the story.

All the swearing early on,but it died back a bit later,also there was a plague of winking at one point. It was a pity that Lauren’s cries to “daddy” were not indulged by him: you ARE a good girl: Daddy is very very pleased with you, she deserved more effort. And it began tho emerge that he had been one of those hot teachers that all girls are crazy about,which rather lifted the fantasy away from me. I couldn’t get over the first contact in the shop, there was an awful lot of shoulder shrugging in answer to her gushing approach,when,in fact he should have been beaming and “ on point” and maybe asking teacher type questions about how she had been awarded a scholarship place. Many times it was great. I liked incidental details thrown in,like her placement at the hospital and about her job in the office. She is a fine strong willed young woman and very desirable too,well worth the story telling. A fine creation.

Good story , wouldn't worry about the swearing objections because everyone that hasn't lived in a hole or cone of silence for the last 15 years knows that for men and woman under 30's , fuck or any of it's deratives is to be used at least twice in any meaningful sentence.. One of the most versatile words in the language really... Personally like the " Thank Fuck for that " one best.... cheers

5 hot former female students approached me in the same manner.Beautiful faces and bodies, and voices singing to me.. aching to fuck. I fucked two of them, but the others...we didn't get to it. If I could live my life over...omigod...I would still be fucking them.

My impatience and the plethora of beautiful women I was fucking from age 20 to 50, caused me to miss out on some of the best women because I was not patient enough. I was married 7 times and had one child who turned out to be a leftist, I am a right winger...Now I am alone and older. Dreaming of so many fabulous fucks..Ohhh

I dream of those wonderful times and the blessed luck I had with tears in my eyes...I don't want to die alone...and I realize that death is probably the end..

Now I know that passionate love is more important than ideology and I would never have join the military again and got shot up so many times.Yet I loved war...a harsh mistress.

How I miss my happiness.....If reincarnation could bless me again..I would relive my youth and fixate on love...not war. I would stay married to my one and only love.... We would have raised many beautiful blond right wingers. ...God help me.

You write really great stories. Thank you.

You are so full of shit. It's ok to enjoy the story, but to say you did better and brag about being married 7 times? Your a loser

Maximum stars!!!

BUT I'll pass. I never read fantasy stories. When she reaches sexual maturity and ready to rock and roll her old hubby will be ready to roll over and go to sleep.

Absolute set up for a cheating wife and it's the idiot husbands own fault for his fantasy of a young pussy...there is no excuse for stupid

You simply nailed this story. Thank you.

i loved the story and gave it 5 stars. i was really surprised at the end of the story when Breanna agreed to be John's wife. All through the story i expected that at one point, Breanna would leave John for a guy who was more her age. That is why the ending was so surprising. Really enjoyed the story and wished i could give you more than 5 stars. Wonderful!!!!

There are a couple of commenters here who would be better off just keeping to themselves...other people have called them our, all I gotta say is...just shut up.

As far as the swearing...I learned, the hard way, how using coarse language marks one as being boorish and somewhat ignorant...and I am not a fan of a lot of that language in the stories...

Now, John Heller and HIS story...**5** stars, is worthy of more, as, again more to the story than just a wank-off...the girls are sweet, and Breeana FINALLY grew up, deciding "Mr Heller" was good for her in a couple of ways....YYYYAAAAYYYY!!

Wish there was more, loved the whole thing...makes me wish a couple of my old students would 'look me up'...

Outstanding story, very well written and told.............():\

Top story if a bit sentimental at the end.

this was such fun!!!!! Thank you for making "old" not mean dead.

Was it a Boy or a Girl 🤭

Great story. Very erotic! ;-p”

Nope, she's too young, he's just a pervert, and he also helps her cheat on her boyfriend. Unlikeable characters all around.

Now he gets to call her Mrs. Heller.