by justboycrazy
This could have been a great story, just some small details, like a pirate ship would have had a crew of 50-200 men and boys.
It probably would have been a little difficult to be taken by suprise by another pirate ship and its crew.
Could still be a good story, if you got a little bit more realistic. Perhaps read some historical fiction about that time and embelish a little.
I think you could do with swotting up on some naval jargon:
Bedroom - cabin
Stop the ship - weigh anchor
Enter the ship - board the vessel
And........
No pirate was EVER called Trevor!!
Nice concept though, keep going.