by fungatorgurl101
It's been a long time since we chatted. Love the story. I can picture you actually doing this. I definitely rate this a full erection!
I completely enjoyed this well written story. I particularly loved the teasingly undressing scene, wow! I was nice how it ended with the tenderness of love. Thank you for sharing.
very well done, as the air is charged as one reads this wonderful work.
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh, to be that lucky guy!!!
I loved every detailed description. It was very erotic and sensual how you let the passion build, until they were caught up in the primal urgency for one another.
Very sexy.
Amazing story! I would read more from you :) My only complaint...it was too short ;-)
Typos and cryptic (or just plain shitty excuse for English) description for this crap? Ordinarily, I would have (correctly) surmised this wasn't worth my time. But this was SO shitty, I just had to say SOMETHING!