All Comments on 'At the Pool'

worth a 1 for the writer of like stories.

work not done at home makes him grumpy, the behaviour after that not. any dumber plot is not possible

With an attitude like this asshole husband has why bother getting married. A cheating wives story coming up

Many lives are all about the adjustments - both in the minds of others and in your middle mind. Research and experimentation having already shown success in the rear mirror. Jake and Anne developed a day of wine & roses warlike competitive expression that stimulates and recharges their feeling for one another. The rare woman who studies and enjoys oral (not duty bound or sharing the pleasure) for self is one power hungry bitch (a woman is never more powerful than when directing a scene with oral event). And when a man (Jake) can recognize the blossoming flower is instead a tree, enjoys the competition and not feel threatened by a mates art form - he is expressing a vicariousness most do not allow themselves to experience that growth (both for their mate and themselves).

the writer(s), rollingcoffe is temporarily my hero (smile). Re-read and edit the two maybe three errors - which are of little significance for a great canvas with deeply hued colors with both twisting and broad strokes.

BULLSHIT.

Thoroughly enjoyed it. This man isn't a wimp or a cuckold, so all you needle-dicked, loving wives hating, anon fucktards can fuck off. He is the master of his woman, who is strong in her own right. Great story!

Total revolting. Author must be a real perv.

But, of course, both she and her husband are both miserable excuses for humanity. The "friends" are pretty wretched, too! And the positive reviews! hahaha

Maybe this is the real reason the "rapture" didn't happen this weekend - no one worth saving. :)

As a slutty submissive wife myself I totally got off on this one. Thank you and keep them coming

Probably more a fetish thing or group sex.

Fantastic story think its great....sick of reading the goody two shoes reserved comments refering it being a bad story. Adult sites contain sexually explicit material it shat it all about, so if its not your thing there are plenty romance novels around to be read HELLO???

I think the guys complaining are idiots this story was awsome thanx for sharing !

Very hot,I really enjoyed it. Don't mind the morality police. Why they're on here reading stories that will obviously involve wives and group sex I'll never know. You did a fantastic job though, please keep writing! I love that the husband isn't submissive or getting humiliated. Anne was great too, you gotta love girls that love to suck cock(s)!

Wrong category. Should be in the fetish category. With the other cuck stories.

did i read this a few mo. ago?

it was cool, the ending was a bit violent, but decent porn.

What am I doing with my life?

i actually found your story from someone who favorited a story from both of us and I couldn't stop reading. I love "cock worship" and it turns me on to hear my husband/Dom "threaten" to have me suck off one of his friends. I'll be sending him this story and fully expect to learn not to swallow until permission is granted!!

As a neighbor of Jake and Anne with a good view of their pool I often enjoyed watching Anne sunbathing. After viewing the activities described in this story I decided to make an effort to become more friendly with them.

Wow what a nasty/ dirty slut !!!

Too bad you quit.

Amazing Anne needs to be used repeatedly.