All Comments on 'Auction'

This is really good, I hopee the sequal comes soon!

I am also wet reading what happened to Stephanie.. haha

I love it very much personally. Hope I can see more of your work!

Thanks!

Made my pulse race.

More please.

this was a very teasing story it got me hard but the bitch should have been put in stocks and her pussy & ass fucked all night by the town folk and face covered in cum

But, I would think the film crew (also English) would have stepped in and bid for her benefit.

Lets'assume they didn't understand what was going to happen...OK, do you think she would have not started kicking and screaming once they reached for her top. Come on, if this is going to happen, write an Epilogue: ie: The next morning the Police had kept the crowd back but not the Police, they had taken turns on her and were trying to decide what to do with her. Sell her as a sex slave, hide her body or...a British Embassy Officer accompanied by some British Grenadier Guards showed up and with some talking convinced the Mayor to turn her over, her camera crew had gotten through to the Embassy.

The Auction presents an interesting aside on tourism. Do the tourists stare at the locals or vice versa. Certainly the ending is a surprise with Stephanie's local contact Yuri being part of the play. As with the really good writers on this site, the author presents sex as an adjunct to the story line and the moral of the story, rather than the focus.The author skillfully breaches one of the conventions of good short story telling. Convention posits that a short short can only be told from a single perspective. Here the author shifts perspective from Stephanie to Yuri, adroitly to make the point. Among name writers, only the America war correspondent Bill Maudlin was capable enough to do this in a short story mode. Excellent piece! As an aside for your eh--colonial audience please provide an American translation for English terms such as "trainers." Here in the former colonies "trainers" means an infants (Br) knickers (Amer underpants). CHEERIO//Later Dude

Cute. Totally implausible, but cute.