All Comments on 'Audrey's Happy Birthday'

froghills,

Well, now you've gone and done it - once again. Written a story about a family who plays together - ahhhh...well, whatever. *grins* Loved your characters. Don't look now, but I think your computer is beakoning you to write another one just as delightful as this one.

I loved this story. It was really good since you did not reveal what the gift was. Left us wondering. PLEASE HURRY WITH NEXT INSTALLMENT

What was in the box?

Let's see - big box gift, family saved up for it for a long time... move it to her bedroom. Audrey's friend's mom has one. Could be a wide-screen TV or a Sybian.

Great story, please where is part two?