All Comments on 'Augmentation Ch. 01'

Great beginning, Jason. I'm looking fwd to the ensuing chapters. Would be happy to edit the future stuff if you wish. But this first chapter still looks error free. Well done!

My only soft criticism in the content is the believability of exposition in 3025 where guys still get together to watch games and gals visit comparing sexual attributes and behavior. However future fantasy is subjective. So your perspective is just as valid as mine or anyone else's.

Cheers!

Love the story. Keep it up! Maybe a sequel!

I really liked your story. From the difference in the augmentations of each girl to the curiosity as she experienced new sensations. Bravo!

This is almost the perfect bi-curious fantasy for a guy! Finally, a safe cock, attached to a sexy woman, ready to play with without the threat of feeling homosexual. I love it!