All Comments on 'Aunt Carla Ch. 06'

This girl is a keeper. I love girls in high heeled boots. I want to know what will happen to our hero when he returns to his aunts. I hope it involves leather and boots. Keep it coming!

FOR FUCK'S SAKE! Learn the difference between 'your' and 'you're' and 'to' and 'too'. At least characters that are supposed to have been to college might be more credible. If you want to improve get an editor, and take careful note of what corrections she or he makes. The story is fine, wading through a mire of grammatical errors is not.