All Comments on 'Aunt Helen Ch. 03'

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Of these lovely sluts will he knock up? Oh, fiddle! Both!

Loved it. Please post chapter 4 of this great story soon. I really enjoy reading it.

love the story, but half way through Janet became Judy?

Hate to be critical but name change of Janet to Judy really kills the story. I only voted a 3 because of this. Hope Chapter 4 is better.

Who's Judy? I thought it was Janet...?! Can't keep your players straight?

just need to re edit janet for judy or vice versa

Same as previous comments, a good story spoilt by Janet / Judy name changes.... A bit of proof reading before submitting it for publication would have been beneficial, yes ?

When did "Janet" become "Judy"? Keep track of your shyt!

Why didn't you read your story before you posted it? If you had have done you would surely have noticed that Janet had turned into Judy.

It's a basic writing procedure. Not good enough.

Yes Janet did become Judy but why in hells name did you choose these names? They're not very Japanese sounding are they?