by S3lwyncd0g
wow this story really took a crap. it went from somewhat believably to none at all. I didn't even get passed the first page. I just lost interest. The story took a real crap, but i guess it's perfectly believable for new lovers who professed love to 180 and have an open relationship. This should be the last one you ever write.
So far I'm very much enjoying this series.
Its Naughty and Loving, And not over the top
into the realm of the absurd where most story's
end up getting derailed....
I just Love happily ever after tales....
I think you have a winner; Taking a crap at first is not always a bad thing I gave you a 5. tenbears 43 god luck keep writting
Good story ...you should add anal to aunt June first then the mom
One comment said something asinine about believable, don't this store is about that its a fun read and funny at times. Loving it!