by eroticpassions69
Interesting start but a little drawn out. Any plan on continuing because I see no chapter listed?
Love the leather, dominatrix, femdom theme. Now let's get auntie into her leathers and high heel pumps and have some fun dominating her nephew!
You MUST bring us more! This story has so many possibilities - you have got to continue it.
Many young men need proper discipline and training. Often bad behavior is ignored when it should be addressed. If mother does not do it aunt or grandmother are best.
I am not able to comment on the story for there was none to read. Perhaps if the author had actually written an additional 4-5 pages then I would have something to comment on.
But if we don't know what happens during the trip, how do we know of his enjoyment?
Thanks for the comments, everyone. This story is intended to be a mufti-chapter tale, but somehow the "Part One"piece in the original title got left off during submission.. Thanks for the input about timing. This is my first piece of adult writing.and I'm still trying to get a good sense of story flow More chapters are forth-coming!!!
What a great start. Please keep the story going and let's get some exciting details of his training with Aunt Liz. I can't wait.
I've always intended to finish this tale. It's going to get hotter! Much, much hotter. Since I'm unable to access this account, I'm now working as eroticpassions6969. Literotica support services may email if this to verify that I'm the same author. TY. By the way, somebody violated my copyright by reproducing this story on another site under a different author name and w/o my permission. Uncool!
Please continue the story. I'm very interested in learning what happens next! The fact that the mother knows something and isn't telling him is quite hot, too.
Can't wait for the next chapter, my mind is buzzing with the possibilities.
What a waste of time. You back to school made lean how to write a full fucking story