All Comments on 'Aunt Phyllis Ch. 02'

First off I would like to tell you that if english is your first language, it is terrible. If english is not your first language then you need to stick to your native tongue. I think that the story may have had potential is you had used better grammer ans made things more clear... It was painful to even get through the first paragraph... My suggestion to you is stop writing.

It is a sad state of affairs when someone your age cannot spell or use the english language at all. Get yourself an editor and some help. Literotica has some help for new writers and (I'm really sorry), but you need a lot of help.

hard to understsand. your sentences dont flow and go together. BUTT other than that my cum was one of about five really really hard cumms I have ever had

spell check....