All Comments on 'Autumn in the Window'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
fun tantasy

This was a simple fun fantasy with a great ending. good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Very Good!

This was a good piece of work. Fun, light, and I like the hook you leave for a sequel.

I'd be most interested in reading said sequel, if you're working on it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
good work

Nicely done! Fun and credible. Waiting for the sequel if you're working on it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Super Story!!!

What a great ending!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
What they said

That says it all

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
mmmmmm...real niiiice

very well written

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Red hair-less and Deliciously Decadent

I could see myself within your "grip". Reminded me of(no-shit her true name) Patty Ball. She lived in the next apt. 'Keep on keepin on'

some_boysome_boyabout 16 years ago
fantastic.

well, I've read a couple of your stories now, and I think they're great. I really liked the description just when she started in on herself. It's hard not to find one's self trapped in cliche, when after all it's the same parts in use in every story, so it's good when you manage somehow to grasp the essence of sex (which somehow chemically transcends the cliche) and recreate it in a few words.

Anyway, nice going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Wishing you were my neighbor

Unfortunately I don't have any neighbors that close to me. My pussy would love a jerk off partner.

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