All Comments on 'Ava and/or Eva Pt. 04'

by Passions_Fool

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
lost it

Was an awesome story until you got into the sub/dom bullshit

I seen sub / dom and that ended the entire useless fucking story for me

Passions_FoolPassions_Foolover 9 years agoAuthor
Can't please everyone

Sorry you were turned off by the Dom/sub, but I can't please everyone. Thanks for the feedback.

IwilldoitFeb31IwilldoitFeb31over 9 years ago

Sorry, turned off by the Dom/sub,bondage stuff 5 star story killed.

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 5 years ago
Not a Fan of Sub Dom

But the subject matter less (Sub Dom) is hot and the sex and your description of it was really hot. So you got one of my very few, hard earned 5's.

Passions_FoolPassions_Foolover 5 years agoAuthor
I've heard that from a few ...

While Dom/sub is included in the future chapters, I try not to go too deeply into the genre since I have very limited knowledge of it. I stick mostly to the bondage and some pain aspects. Thank you for the nice comments despite your reservations. Much appreciated.

AJeyeAJeyealmost 5 years ago
Sub/Dom

I actually enjoyed your use of S/D. Very light and seemingly playful. I'm sure hardcore S/D people would be disappointed, but for us posers, thought it was fun. I've tried this, even switching roles to "make it fair". Adds a bit more kink to a kinky situation.

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