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All Comments on 'Ava's Fantasy'

by Lacey_St_Sin

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Loved it!

I loved how you were able to develop the characters so well in such a short story! Loved Kane's personality, but also his vulnerability. Great first time story.

DrElectrogasmDrElectrogasmover 9 years ago
Very Real

You are very talented. You have a way of putting the reader right there in the moment. I truly enjoyed this story. Well done!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Very nice

Very well written and with surprising depth for a short story.

ReefBeachReefBeachover 5 years ago
that was quick

But very satisfying! You put in enough detail to make realistic characters, & good sex. Well done!

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