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This has potential. :) I'm curious to see where you take it. :)

An interesting start to a well written story.

Agreed, an excellent start. It's refreshing to read something by someone who seems to know and understand the English language; too many don't seem to have a clue. Will be looking forward to where you take this.

I'll be on the lookout for updates, this could continue on to a really great story :) There were a couple editing flaws but other than that I am anxiously waiting for the next installment! Don't be fearful of your writing ability, you are marvelous.

Looking forward for the next update, sounds interesting! Good work so far!

Good detail, you've begun to paint an interesting picture.i will look forward to seeing where this goes.

I really like the story so far wish there was more of it though...now ill be waiting for next installment

Doing good so far a good plot being developed keep it up.

I've watched a LOT of movies involving women & self-defence (especially towards men) & I can guarantee that a punch to the nose probably won't be enough to ward off an attacker for long enough to make any other life-saving manoeuvres. At worst, you break his nose, make it bleed, cause him to flinch for a moment ... but then he becomes more enraged than ever before. However ... a solid blow to a guy's throat (right in the "Adam's apple"); he'll be clutching his throat & gasping for a good breath of air, which he won't be able to get right away if your punch was hard enough to cause immediate swelling. This would buy you far more time to get away. Just thought I'd share this little nugget of info, from one writer to another; though my writing definitely isn't something you'd find on Literotica... =o)