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88nicegirl88nicegirlover 10 years ago
More please!!!!

You are a wonderful writer. The imagery is impressive. Please finish this. I have to know how it ends!!!

Littleblackdress54Littleblackdress54over 11 years ago
Love it, can't wait for more

When is the next chapter being released?

I can't wait for what's to come

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I think we have found Connor's gift ^.^ how awesome

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Sleepwalking????or in this case sleepf***ing???

cliffgirl08cliffgirl08about 12 years ago

Great story, imaginative. Both boys dreaming of each other, but it sounds like the sex isn't a dream.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Interesting gift

So Connor influences Avery's dreams?

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