All Comments on 'Avoiding That Train to Georgia'

A good FAWC entry, you used the song well. You had it taped - those feelings of not being quite sure what's going on, but you realise painfully that it's not about talent.

It was a bit bumpy around the seduction of Carey by Dale. He drifted off into the flashbacks, and then suddenly we were back to be told: "No, we're not doing auditions." The shock of finding that out after putting out came across well, however we never quite got into the moment of him sucking Dale off.

I felt more could have been done with Carey's ambivalence, his farm boy innocence clashing with his liking for the sex and his ambition. Maybe there's a Part 2 about those feelings.

(That would be 'gay first time' as a tag? cuz there wasn't any fisting ;).)