All Comments on 'Awakened by Death'

Hi,one of your stories was recommended as being similar to one of mine, so I took the trouble to read. I feel pride that my own, although completely different in theme, should be compared to your own excellent writing. Well done I loved it.

Excellent writing, i enjoy the read.

I quite enjoyed your story, though I did find the shifting between first-person perspectives to be a little disorienting. I don't know that there is a really good way to handle that technique, which is probably why it's fairly unusual in literature. However, it did offer a perspective in the story that I doubt could have been conveyed in third person.

I hope your planning to write many more pages for this story, it's fabulous! Please write more, lots more. I can't wait to read it. Hurry!

Please write more, it is a fabulous story. Can't wait to read many more chapters.