All Comments on 'Awakened to the Forbidden Ch. 01'

Great story. Good dialogue and hot sex and hotter anticipation.

I enjoy reading this story, it makes me wonder what will happen next. I can't wait to read the next part.

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Ignore requests to hurry Chapter 2 along - take all the time you need to get it right. Don't spoil it by hurrying.

long and sort of boring in places but all in all ok

Rarely do stories on Literotica make me feel for the characters in ways beyond the physical. This is one of the few that manage to actually examine the inner workings of such a taboo lifestyle, yet still remain erotic and thoroughly satisfying. Take all the time you need to get part 2 done. You have people who now expect you to keep on par. Excellent work.

It sounds like these two sisters and brother were dealt a bad hand by their parents. They've struggled, and what's next? I'm eagerly awaiting Chapter 2, but as a previous person commented, take your time to work the plot out well. Thus far, you've done a good job.

I really liked the build-up and I LOVE a believable back-story. Keep it going!

they dont come much better if at all ever..You're a star and i'm jealous

this story had too many inconsistensies to be enjoyable. Between the incest, the guilt, the alcoholism and the drunk driving, you weaved a plot of sex and despair that came off more pathetic than erotic. While attempting to show Colin as the true alpha male, you introduced the father as a drunk...who drove drunk despite his daughter recently being awokened from a 2 year coma....WTF? AS well, I don't care how close a family you are...but you don't "forget" you're in a shower and suddenly hug your older brother then proceed to have a conversation with him while standing there stark nekkid. good luck with future stories.

It's easy for little people to hide under the cloak of anonymity and take their pathetic and cowardly shots. Most of them wouldn't recognize talent if it was excrement and they had fallen into it. You wrote a good story. I loved it and I'm sure that most of the people who read it will appreciate it. Please do give us the rest of the story. Thank you for your submission.

Absolutely top-notch! Characters with emotional depth and realistic lives? It doesn't get better than that.<br><br>There <i>better</i> be a happy ending, though.<br><br>Please?

I really liked the background and the character development. The sex was hot, too. Not your typical stroker story!!

Great start seems like a well thought out plot with interesting characters. Even the few mistakes are easily ignored in my hate to continue reading lol.