All Comments on 'Awakening'

by wickedferret

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manyeyedhydramanyeyedhydraalmost 14 years ago
Interesting beginning

The character's name is a little OTT, but otherwise it's a hot little succubus scene with some interesting teasers for future development. I'm surprised there aren't more comments and why the score is so low as succubus stories normally do well on Lit. Hope you keep writing anyway.

jonmartin22jonmartin22almost 14 years ago
nice one

..very much enjoyed

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Not sure this is horror, but I like it :) Is there a part 2?

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