by Twisted_Mistress
It was in realms of famtasy but still held my attention. Different but good.
Damn hot, but I hope there is more...so what happens now?
I like the story so far - it's erotic and unique. Hope there's more to cum
quite well written, and very erotic. but i agree with everyone else... what happens next?!
This was awesome. Very well written. Such detail that one could easily imagine themselves being there participating.
Kudos to you.
I really enjoyed this story. The detail of it all really got my imagination rolling. I could picture the girl on the altar and everything that was happening to her. Very vivid. Loved it. Thanks for sharing!
Excellent job. This story is one of the best uses of the supernatural that I have ever read. It is erotic, well-paced, and completely consistent with the reality the story creates. Fabulous job! Keep writing.
I'm still blushed after reading that story. It was wonderful and very hot! Very well written and paced and a great build up. Makes me want more and more and more and to be in her place!
What an excellent read, and a scintillating imagination. I'm very eager for more of the Adventures of the Queen Mare (echoes of Epona, perhaps...?). If you believe in fairies, especially as a adult, this one's for you!
As a faerie lover myself, I was delighted to find this story! I was even more delighted with the delicious eroticism which captured the essence of faerie as I know it. The story drew me in and kept me captivated, just as the faeries did with their "mare!" I agree with others--I want more!
Very hot story please Mistress keep writing this story and tell me what happens to her and maybe have her get pregnant or have her bring in another female
I enjoyed this story a lot.
One thing that was so great was the amount of detail you had. So many stories on here are actually short quick fucks. They spend a lot of time leading up to the sex and then once we get to the sex its short and lacking in detail. So well done!
It was imaginative, well written and a hot read. The only problem I found, was that there wasn't more of it... how about coming back with more chapters?!!?
This story did right by me! Wow! I fervently hope you will expand this storyverse and keep going with a sequel!