All Comments on 'Awesome Barbershop Afternoon'

There is no need in these fantasy stories for the Pill or Condoms/Rubbers. Perhaps when you fuck the housewife, you will remember that. Until then I cannot give you any more than a '75'.

read about "show or tell" in the HOW-TO section here, it describes how to avoid these type of description paragraphs that you use:

q>"She was probably 20 to my 18. She was not a tall girl. I guessed she stood about 5'3. She was a large girl. She must have weighed around 190 pounds. Her arms and legs were thick and her breasts were incredible. I thanked God that it was hot out because she wore a tank top with a plunging neckline. 36 DDs were my best guess with cleavage that seemed to almost touch my face. Incredible. Below her eyes were full cheeks topped with blush and lips fuller than Angelina Jolie's graced with the most intense red lipstick I had ever seen."<Q

I hope there is more to this story.

That was a fantastic story. I really liked it. And, don't be put off by the comment that other guy made about the story being a fantasy, therefore there being no need for rubbers or condoms.

Forget him...this was your fantasy. And, if you look at his profile, he pretty much shoots blanks anyway, so of course he's not going to like the idea of condoms. That's not your problem.

Anyway, great story, and I really look forward to you either expanding on this story, or writing something new. Thank you!

The worst part was when I scrolled down and realizedthere was no more to the story. I even liked hearing the girls moan outside the door and finding them fingering themselves in the main room, however unrealistic it was.

Very erotic, very easy to fap to. Good job. I hope you'll write a part two.