by RichardKing
Leave the people hanging for another story. Loved it. Always did that when I woke up from a drunken state...Aww Shit!!!
Story was a bit jumbled. But I really like this story. Short sweet an funny as hell can't wait to hear more. Plz write another chapter
great idea rollin around in your head I see, but for such a small tease , i only give 3 stars to one pg stories . hope to see more , maybe you submit 2 pages and I give the stars a good story should have.
I could care less if anybody writes a comment good or bad. I didn't call Literotica stupid, just the people who generate story tags when you don't provide any.yourself/ I've been reading other stories on here and other sites for a long time,
I've written many stories over the past three years, under different pen names. It seems that no one thinks ill of Literotica, at least not out loud. Their five days to get a story through the system is only the most problematic issue they have.
I may or may not post any more stories, so to all of those 'Anonymous commenters' FUCK YOU!
Loved your comment Richard. You can disallow "anonymous" commenters by requiring them to sign in to comment. Standing up to these senseless cowards is the right thing to do. I will always stand up for an authors rights.
Liked the story the end was awesome you could feel for the guy hung over and just coming round an she makes the day!
More please
it seems there must be a requirement when one becomes a member that you have to be a kiss ass and give all stories a rave review no matter how stupid or poorly written they are. if readers would give HONEST comments like the anons do these poor excuse for writers MIGHT improve or go away. this story needs to be rewritten by a GOOD WRITER that knows how to develop a plot and characters.