All Comments on 'Axina and Burk Ch. 01'

Great start sometimes I wonder how you have the exact same ideas for stories as I do. However unlike you I can't find the motivation to put pen on paper. Hope you continue with this series, it has so much potential. Love it

I loved it please continue

Good story.

I like the two characters.

I like the end with the apparition of the Black Witch.

I hope that in this story Burk will have difficulties for submit the Ladies of Bosom.

I love the whole concept with breasts containing magical energy, and the acts of transference with feminine energy. You've inspired me to include something like it in my own writings.

This was an awesome read. There seemed to be a great deal of thought put into how a breast culture would work and I like how sucking the feminine energy from the breasts is so similar to how a sorcerer would suck out souls in traditional fantasy. Awesome twist.

seriously, what. the. fuck.

Fucked up in just the right way

GR8 start .