by Narg
Man, I hardly ever comment on anything here but your story is really something else!
I love the whole universe you created and the interludes of this chapter and I would really like to wish for more from you.
So far it's been a treat to read this series and I want to thank you!
Personally I love the new direction you are heading in. The new characters seem really interesting and make for some hot action.
love your story, keep writing please been looking forward to this story for ages