- Romance
- Axiom Ch. 03
- Page 2
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"Wow," Gwyneth breathed, unable to stop herself from feeling a pang of attraction. Aidan's handsome doctor brother, huh? Well, a girl could dream.
"You interested?" His gaze was penetrating, although his voice was nonchalant.
She surveyed him quietly for a moment. Aidan Scodelario, the berg, the cold, demanding lawyer - so quickly reduced to a fawning younger brother in front of Michael. Alone, he was untouchable, domineering, the alpha male. But as he asked her that question, she saw it in his eyes - the tiniest hint of a doubt. A flicker of hesitation, an infinitesimal spark of insecurity. He may have been the best of the best, but he would always come second to his elder sibling. And with that, she knew. Gwyneth may not be his girlfriend - she wasn't obligated to take his side and reassure him that he was the one she wanted. Besides, Michael would be a better choice - she wouldn't have to worry about office politics then, would she?
But as she looked into those crystal blue eyes, the sculpted cheekbones, the stern gaze - she knew.
"Nah," she answered truthfully. "You're more my type." Gwyneth winked at him inconspicuously.
Aidan said nothing, nor did he show any signs of acknowledgment - he just continued to fork the rest of his food into his mouth. Did he react? She couldn't tell. Yet maybe, just maybe, she saw a small smile, she thought. An almost negligible movement of the lips, or a twitch of an eyelid - maybe, just maybe that was the answer Aidan was looking for.
- COMMENTS
Levindlover 1 year agoI know that it has been over 11 years since you wrote the story, but I wanted to make a couple of comments anyway.
First of all, I am really getting into this story as you are making these characters truly lifelike. They are not shallow, and you are giving great detail into not only their physical, but also their psychological beings.
The storyline is great, and I am being drawn into wanting to read more and more of what is coming next. My only criticism is that I wish that the chapters for a longer as it seems that just when it’s getting into a storyline, it jumps into the next, instead of leading it move smoothly within the same chapter, which could easily be done.
Thank you very much for sharing the story with us as I know that it takes great detail and work to do what you have done.
Sincerely
Daniel
Sidney43over 12 years agoJust read all three submissions and this is a great start to a romance story. This chapter, where she resisted the irresistible brother is the start of the relationship. I wonder how many girlfriends Aiden has lost to his older Brother, he has probably played second fiddle to him all his life in spite of his accomplishments in his own right?
