by hotpup
You have got to follow that story up. Really enjoy the subject matter and your writing style. Please add more face sitting and rimming.
Being a B. A. B. myself i really enjoyed this story. It made me so hot and wet with the hard fucking and the bedroom scene was awesome. Please write another chapter for I wish to see more of what happens.
... was mentioned in the new story thread.
Here is the review thread:
http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=428901
Here is the thread that you can comment on the review:
http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=428875
Have a lovely day,
Lizzy
There is nothing so succulent as a big ass bitch, unless it is a huge ass bitch.
Well, My mom is a B'A'B, and I love reading about BABs and then jerk off thinking about my mom. U helped me this way.. Thanks. Aditya
Another masterpiece (you've been inactive too long). And fuck right, keep writing. "B.A.B." has the potential to be your best storyline ever. Something to the scale of "Adam's Apples" is only appropriate. You should do more incest Father/daughter, Mother/son types, plus add lesbian scenes (there's not enough "Big Ass" stories involving 2 or more women with equally fat asses. And a little variety is always welcomed, White, Black, and Latin big asses of various nationalities (Italian, Puerto Rican, Brazilian, East Indian, etc.) make for a good read. Nonconsent is always a sure route (taking a big fat ass is a fantasy of all B.A.B. fans). And with the big tit theme, maybe a little lactation, but on the extra kinky side (spraying big round asses with tit-milk may be a little freaky to some, but I'd me much obliged.) Over all, keep up the good work, and definently, this story should be just the begining.
Big Ass is a Heavenly blessing, being in Big Ass is like being in Heaven.
An amazing story. Full of action and lust. Love that big ass bitch as she gets it over and over. Bring it on!
Wae great reading... I was close to doing that at one time, but other lady backed out...