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Ash then whispered, "Jimmy, I have something I need to tell you."
- COMMENTS
mrsugarloverover 6 years agoI knew it couldn't be over. I knew it. This is the best. So romantic! So erotic!
Anonymousover 10 years agoNooooooooo!!!!!! The WORST possible cliff-hanger!!!!!! D: is she pregnant? is she videotaping the whole thing as revenge blackmail? is she getting married to the douce? is she sick and going to die? TOO MANY POSSIBILITIES!!!!!!
greenhawk46over 10 years agointeresting to read each part and see where it was going-I can't believe you left it hanging there - cool characters-good sex scenes-well written-hope you continue it-thanks
Anonymousover 10 years agoThis has been one of the best, most involved stories I've ever read. Please continue! I've never commented on anything on this website, but felt compelled to comment here. Absolutely magical.
OU812bf342over 10 years agoThis has been one of the most involving series I have read on Literotica. Most would see this is fantasy and so it should all be happy and light. I see it as being realistic and it makes the characters more real when they have to face emotional turmoil. This last chapter has tied up some the loose ends from previous chapters. I was glad that Jim and Ash were able to make up and that they have forgiven or at least understand why Patty did what she did. They have to realize that they will have a special relationship for the rest of their lives and no matter what their future relationship status that there will be times for them to be intimate with each other. Jill is devoted to him and I think she has an inkling of the reasons for some of the tension in the house. Hopefully she will grow to understand that Jim loves her but there will always be a part of him that loves only Ash. One of the reasons that incest is not condoned and is illegal is the stress it puts on families when others both inside and outside the family discover the truth. The fact of defects in any children is overblown and only starts to show if there are underlying genetic defects that come to prominence or if the coupling are repeated over generations as in the case of the Muslim countries. There it is customary to marry your first cousin and in some areas because of tribal bonds it has went on through several generations with obvious results. But I will get off my soapbox now as that is not what this forum is for. I look forward to future chapters and am relieved that you respond to you readers with occasional updates on the status of the story line. Please do not be in a rush to finish this as all great writing takes time and the effort put in to it shows in the final product. I have read other stories on here that the author was rushed to end the storyline and they always seem to be less than satisfactory and in some cases downright disappointing. One that comes to mind everybody either died or drifted away I was so pissed with the outcome of that story that I stopped reading or commenting on stories for about a month. In closing again well done so far and keep writing and we will keep reading.
Anonymousover 10 years agoPlease continue the series. Other than a bump or two it has been a good read.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThere were times I found myself skimming the sex scenes because the story itself is so great, keep it up, love it.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI am new to this site.I really enjoyed this story so much that I couldn't stop until it was done. I hope that you continue with this story as I want more,(like Jimmy).
hope there is more soon.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThis has been "THE BEST" stories I have read. N I have read it twice over. Please continue.
