All Comments on 'BabySitter Bet'

Please dont ever write one again

Nonconsent, yes, reluctance, yes. But this needs a rape tab attached. This is more than just normal erotic rape fantasy, this is too possible and needs that forewarning. Not horribly written, just needs more character build up.

One of your greatest stories!

Non-consent/releuctance can be equal to rape. I found no problems with this. : )

There are a lot of lousy stories but this is a good one. One of the things that is most of a turn-on is that the wife is willing and an encourager.

Always a pleasure to read your work

Great story and close to real life as well. Thank you.

This story made me cum so hard I woke my husband!

Would have been a lot better if for once you hadn't made such a big thing of the babysitter getting into it as well - then her defeat at the hands of the wife would have been all the sweeter.

This is a bit too possible a young naive babysitter getting raped by the dad an forcing her to keep quiet didn’t find it erotic found it uncomfortable