All Comments on 'Babysitting'

i loved this story.......this is the only story that has gotten me off........holla

Awesome story, really fed my fantasies of being the older woman... Waiting 18 months for husband's return from Iraq so needed a little erotic yet safe release. Very nicely done MNGuy! Thanks!

best story i have ever read

The narrative flowed very well -- I like your writing style. The story was intense and erotic and a pleasure to read. And thanks for spelling words correctly and using good grammar -- it makes a story easier to enjoy if you don't have to work hard just to read it.

This was the best story i have read, such detailed and intense scenes. It painted a picture in my mind like i was there watching. i would definately read any other stories you have written just because of this one. i am really impressed with the quality...and it did get me off pretty quickly.

The best way to become a great lover is to have great teachers. People from Scandinavian countries don't have more sex - they have BETTER sex, because they LEARN the art of making love. When they are ready to experience their first time, their parents encourage them to do it with someone who is experienced, patient, and willing to take the time necessary to make sure they enjoy themselves to the fullest, teaching them first and foremost how to enjoy their own bodies. These parents are enlightened enough to know that a good beginning is the best way to ensure their children have a full and enjoyable sex life. That produces adults with healthier attitudes about sex. This young man was lucky enough to find a lady who taught him to ENJOY both GIVING and RECEIVING pleasure. Now it's his DUTY to pass the knowledge on.

We all could use an expieranced Mom like Brandy, and she could babysit me anytime In stead of me babysitting her children, Story was really hot, and intense, so much that you could almost see the encounter unfolding before your eyes, and I was getting hot myself from the discription, of the lust that was going on, between both Brandy, and her young virgin........ that at times I felt like I was being touched by no one next to me, and needed a Brandy , or a receptive woman near me, It drew you Into the story like you were the third person, well written, and everyone dreams of an encounter like they had , with all that energy and heat........... Jim

This story really got me off, I can't wait to read more of the same

it really took be back to my childhood, when I got my first errection, and fantacised that some one should

wake me up, hold me tight and cajole me to have my first ejaculation.

Lots of incomplete sentences and mispelled words. A good story, but it would have been better if the writer had spent a few minutes proof reading and checking the story before submitting. Also, the person that left the comment "thanks for using good grammar and correct spelling" must not have paid attention to what he or she was reading.

Great story, the mom was a great teacher on the kid and not a bad way on his frist time. Well hope there is more to this.....

I'm so confused though... I don't know who I would rather spend the night with... her or him. They could have made out a little more... I'm a romantic kinda guy.

So Brandy is the women and a babysitting? how old she is?

Who did she fuck and the age of him?

This story was a great read. The flow was very nice. I'm looking forward to reading some of your other works.

It was a nice story, the flow was good, but was lacking a bit to explain the characters, suppose how the boy was hired, what was the age of Brandy, why the babysit was sitting in that room in late night, when he was supposed to leave?? etc. Hope that the writer will take care in his furture stories, as to mention clearly about the characters.

Superb. Loved every minute of it. A++++

You need to continue on this story by knocking Mandy up and making her your baby's Mommy, so she can continue babysitting for you and fucking you at the same time to make more babies with you.

Loved it. Made my pussy wet and pulsing!

hi im new writer myself but i am very turned on by this one you need a part 2 of this please write a next part.

if anyone wants to read my story search smallbutthick and i have a part 1 story there and im working on part two

It uses the word pussy to much use different words like cunt

but it was ruined by silly typos, spelling mistakes, and occasional poor writing.

It say much for 'literary' standards on Lit that it's earned a place in the toplist.

Not recommended.

All I can say is this story was really good, It turned me on in so many ways. It usually takes me about a good ten to fifteen minutes to cum, but after just reading this I cam within five minutes so fucking amazing!

Highly Recommended!;)

P.s only if these were real life characters...*sigh*

... great story! a little variety, too please. Maybe some anal? could he spank her for being 'naughty'?

I wish I could meet a ladylike this. You certainly made my cock enjoy the story as well as I read the story twice.

I'd babysit for half price if this was the tip I got.

Mmmmmmmmm

I sure liked that story!

I hope Your planning on writing a sequel to it!!!

God damn, Im a 20 year old girl, never read these before and holy shit this story got me dripping wet. I would love to be this woman helping a young virgin into my wet pussy.. telling him what to do, how fast... mmm.. This woman reminds me of myself in a lot of ways, and the boy in your story? my perfect victim... ;)

Holy fucking shi... I came six times reading this...

Any story that is hot AND totally believable as something that could actually happen gets an automatic 5 from me. =]

9/10 though. The guy's dialogue was a wee bit odd. Too much OK and Yea without any thoughts or descriptions with it. Food for thought.

Clearly a teenage guy's dream of being seduced by a beautiful woman. Good story,

Super sexy! 🥂