All Comments on 'Back from College'

I love the build up. the tension worked for me.

Very hot story. I love the tension. However, that said, you really should have somebody proofread/edit your work. It's a shame to have to be taken out of a really hot scene because of grammatical errors, etc.

A couple that seem to jump out:

He "stood still" for two hours while lying in bed? I know what you're trying to say, but you need to work a little bit better at saying/writing what you want your readers to read.

"He kept wanking and stopped censoring his fantasies; in MY mind his daughter was still a virgin, begging him to be her first because she wanted someone to do it right."

Keep working at it, though...you're clearly a very skilled story teller, and I truly look forward to reading the next chapter.

Thanks for your work!

Very hot story. Look forward to reading more. Just my type of story. Love the deliberate pace.

My new favorite author! Hurry and write the rest of this delicious story!! My pussy is wet and throbbing, and needs release! LOL

You had me caressing my own pussy while reading this and I cannot wait for the next part! So incredibly hot!

Can't wait for you to continue this one - God I have already cum twice to it and am hard again thinking about the sequel! Hurry! LOL

Very hot story!! You are now my favorite author. I was experiencing the same hardness as ur main character.

You are a very talented writer! And so sexy in your thoughts.

The earlier comments here are clear testimony to your ability to arouse with words and you worked it for me. I look forward to reading more of your work.

mmm, just reading this made my pussy wet, i stroked it the whole time i read...can't wait to read the sequel..

...another chapter. I keep contenting myself listening to your audios, but please continue this story! :)

I love your sexy audios and the hot way you do them, I am dying to read the next back from collage chapter. Please do more and thanks for being a sxylilslut, u rock babe xxx Whiskey1965

From my likes, you have done this perfectly. I like your style of writing and cannot wait for more, the signs of a great writer.

Please do the next chapter!

Then please do the audio for both of them!

You write about a subject matter in a way that its hot and made me want to read on,then left me wanting more!

Thats one way to live up to your name!

Thanks sugar for a fun read and my happy ending, you ever go pro-audio/writing wise- let me know, your worth paying for!

Wow, great writing! i cant wait to read the next one! major cliff hanger!!

This is a few years old, but such a great story! Is there going to be a follow-up?

Your stories are great I love them

This story was going to such a good place, and then you just end it like that? Such a tease.

Great story...Would love to read more. You've got a great grasp of the taboo subject...keep it up! ;-)

Omfg, no part two?!? Youre killing me!! It's just a huge ass tease, better to pull it till you write the rest so we dont have to suffer!! :(

I’m so hang hard!

Good girl princess.