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by Sean Renaud

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Boo!

-- "No. Don't. Stop!" Janna begged. Luna had to surpress a giggle since. Punctuation was important she couldn't tell if the gaps were because she was gasping for air or not. --

Punctuation IS important. So is spelling. So is removing random words. So is writing sentences that make sense.

Our lez contingent may not like the "reprogramming" theme, but that's not the point. This is awful.

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