by evanslily
A truly amazing chapter. I love all your writing and get so excited when I see a new chapter.
Ugh...what a delicious cliff hanger! I'm so looking forward to see where you'll take us next.
ohh wow i wait soo long for this can't wait for another .i'm itching to know what happens next
this was such a good chapter, though i was waiting for Matt to tell her the "secret" but he didnt in the end which was rather disappointing, but this is such a good story nonetheless!!! I LOVED IT !!!! AND PLEAAAAAAASE, make the next chapter as soon as possible for i cannot wait much longer, you should honestly become a professional writer!!! YOU'RE AMAZING
What in the world isn't he telling her? This chapter was so good....you just get beter with each story and each chapter....can not wait to learn what the big secret is and how she will respond to it.
i have been waiting for this chapter. these characters have completely drawn me in. i can't wait for the new installment. good job
..I am now officially late for work...and need to redo my eyeliner after that!! God, my heart was breaking for them at Matt's reaction, but you manage an emotional 180 incredibly well without seeming out of place! And like the person a few comments down....What on earth is he hiding from her!!!!????
Another friggin' cliffhanger! What is this secret he's not telling her? Dammit, woman! Stop holding out on us! Excellent chapter, Lily.
amazing as ever, made me want moooooooooooooooooooooore!!!
Can't wait to read another chapter. I check up on you every few days for an update. I LOVE this story.
You can't leave it there!
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I love how you moved Matt from jerk to honey with flick of your pen. And they found the letters! =D Now for the big bad secret. I've got my suspicions, and none of them are very nice. Most are downright evil. So I think I'll wait for you to post the next chapter and forget everything until then.
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Awesome chapter! (Well worth the wait.) It's great to finally see the primary characters become enlightened to the reasons they were so separated, despite their affection for each other. Now, all we need is a little more truth in communication, a little more revealing of the secrets they keep from each other. Wonderful writing.
-- KK in Texas
i really enjoyed this story please dont wait to long for morre i want to know how matt and melissa ended up do they get married is she goign to have his baby please dont leave it at this thank u
... that you've written. But you already know that.
I love, love, love Matt and Lissy!!!!
I hope Lissy gives it to Ruth with both barrrels!!!
What's her problem?!
Keep up the good work!!!
I LOVE this series. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter!
I wonder if the reason Matt's mom hates Lissy has something to do with this secret he's trying to find a way to tell her. I can't wait for the next chapter and some answers. Great job!
Love your characters. Glad they both know about the letters now. Time for Matt's momma to fess up. Thanks so much for writing!
I love it, I love it, I love it! Keep it up I really love this story and I have been looking almost everyday for updates. I'm so glad that I checked today hehe.
This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter now.
I really hope they're not brother and sister, that would be sad. I still love the story.
I am really enjoying the series. romance, hot sex, and a bit of a mystery ... what could be better. looking forward to the rest of the story.
I have only stumbled onto your stories today and I have to say you are a wonderful writer. I hope you finish this out and that they are not kin to each other in another way.
...of waiting until all chapters have been written is that I don't have to wait for several weeks until the next chapter is posted. This story is getting so captivating that I wouldn't want to wait. So I'm going ahead to the next chapter to see how Matt and Melissa solve the next dilemma their faced with. I know there will be one, because evanslily always throws the main characters into a sticky situation that leaves us breathless. Good job!
Just a small thing. From a male perspective it is difficult to keep up with the rapid mood swings. She loves him, then hates him, then loves him again. I don't think the male is capable comprehending such rapid changes, it just goes to make Lissy look unstable. A male is more comfortable being unsure for a period of time but then making a decision and stick with it. I guess it depends which gender you want your audience to be. anon jerry
Just a pure 9.8! .1 down cos it was not as long as Ch7, and .1 down cos Nobody's perfect!!
...that a teacup could have so many storms in it? Enjoying every minute of it.
Empathetically, it feels like 'deja vu'. Too many secrets, that were hinted at by past anomalies and curious coincidences that didn't make sense at the time. The emotional self destructive 'bi-polar' relationships point to ptsd wounds from formative youth experiences. How tragic and unnecessary.
Love the story, but find you’re leaning a little too much into the asshole and naïveté tropes of Matt and Lissy a bit too much. And the fact that they aren’t listening to each other. Literal textbook toxic conversations highlighting how someone (Matt) GASLIGHTS someone else (Lissy).