All Comments on 'Backscratch Ch. 04'

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 10 years ago
Great story just read all chapters again

Please continue.

Enjoying this a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
One of the Best!

Please complete this amazing story as soon as possible!!!

MattressThrasherMattressThrasheralmost 10 years ago
Love the build up.

This is a very good erotic story. You have a nice style and pace which kept me reading. Keep it up.

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 10 years ago
Well, you are surely dragging this out.

We all know they are going to fuck and I think that 5 or 6 chapters is too long. I guess I will just read it again when I run across it again, from the way you had them familiar with each other in the first chapter I could not have believed that you would make Mom so antsy and have her cock-tease him all this time. Or, I might never run across it again, so be it. Good luck.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Beautiful. Incredible. Awesome. Please continue!

This is just a wonderful story. Please finish it off! It would simply be a HUGE mistake to give up on such an amazing story after all the plot progression so far. I really hope you're working on the next chapters right now! Chapter 5 soon! (Fingers crossed)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
2 stars

To long winded.

Welee58Welee58over 9 years ago
devilishly arousing

it's clear where this is going,but there are so many side thoughts along with it that I can't wait to read the conclusion. please don't wait to long

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great

love the story, hope you will conyinue it!

arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
And so the old adage goes............

Something good comes to those who wait!!!!! I like the slow sensuality...the build up of delicious desire...the almost there around the corner suspense...cannot wait for more!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
This is truly getting better and better and better and........

know it is getting exhausting but you are certainly exciting a lot of people. Looking forward to all your tomorrows.......

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
Why Myrna?

It seems you just can't let them be together. So much for it just being them, alone, as you have had her say so many times.

PerimedesPerimedesover 9 years ago
So deliciously agonizing...

Please give us more soon. My balls are absolutely blue! This is an interesting twist coming up. Please hurry.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 9 years ago

So fucking hot!!! Love that they finally progressed to oral. Hopefully they'll fuck in the next chapter. Also intrigued about the possibility of the neighbor as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fuck this, four chapters all teasing.

I know they fuck in the next chapter, pretty sure, anyway but I won't be teased anymore. I will just go away.

OOAAOOAAalmost 3 years ago

FANTASTIC chapter!!!!!! Congratulations!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

This is a very good story. Mother definitely requires psychiatric assistance. For the past 2 years she has kept everything from the dead husband and son. After the mother climaxed from oral stimulation but refused to continue, the son should have not said a word and simply got up, go down stairs and drink coffee. There is a time for adoration, sensitivity, intimacy. and spiritual togetherness. There is also a time for self-awareness, self-assertiveness and sometimes, simply a response of "grow up". A 5 star series from an incestuous love story stand point.

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