by ikhneumon
I'm really enjoying this story - I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work :)
Nice. I like both guys and I'm glad they're getting together. Look forward to the rest.
You can't stop here, that was a hell of a cliffhanger. Now I want to read more. In any case, it was a great chapter. More please!
I'm really enjoying your theater setting because you've taken the time to develop it and make a part of the sexy romance you're building between these two likable characters. I look forward to reading more. :)
So glad people like D and J, cause I'm getting really fond of 'em myself. I know this chapter is a major tease. I'll make it up to you all in the next one, promise! As a doting author, I felt this emotional moment between the two guys deserved its own space before we moved on to the hot and heavy stuff.
you build your charachters. Really enjoying this romance, gotta go read chapter 3
I agree, you made their increasing attraction very believable, how they are unsure but then seize the chance when everything suddenly clicks. And I liked that Daniel was very aware of his shortcomings regarding bravery - or what he percieves as lack of courage - and even able to joke a bit about himself - and Jeff.