All Comments on 'Bad Biology Teacher'

This a good first story for you! I like this kind when the girl is unknowingly seduced by the teacher.

nice

No build up.

No character development.

Very flimsy explanation of why each of them might proceed with such actions.

And even the sex itself was very sparsely written.

All in all, quite poor.

- JT

Not really what I call a story more like a short memory someone trying to make it really believeable. Suggestion, try as other people wrote on here build up characters which is good point. but whole scenes and what not like for video game almost. Fact his wife not loving him why not have someone interrupt him during the process or something it sounds kind of odd. Another student interrupting rape? I mean abused girl would still scream or cry out. Kind of odd.

Omg. I have a friend just like her! She could be a model but has no self esteem.

Sute, she's abused, why not abuse her a little more? Duh.

This is just rape. Not sexy at all - completely abusive. Reluctance yes, rape no.

not really rape or reluctant if she just obeys... not a very inticing story to be frank.

I liked it! Good 1st story - Keep writing!

Dont continue you have no potential AT ALL

I hope you weren't put off by the shitty comments from others. Not everyone has fantasies in full literay form, the way you write is just how I imagine sex stories in my head, really sexy, any more??!!

Stop writing RAPE STORIES GIRLS R NOT TOYS

I liked it. Straight and simple. I get put off with so much details. I either want it to be completely sensual and with intimacy on a greater level than just the physical act or this type absolutely raw and straight. Keep up your work and don't think about the negative comments. It's a work of fiction. I have read worse than the reluctance as the people are calling it here in the comments about the story. It's fine as long as you can differentiate between content in fiction and reality