All Comments on 'Bad Daddy'

by Sanzamour

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Sysy18Sysy18almost 10 years ago
This

Was hot and cold. He is a very bad daddy . I in joyed . It need to lead up to things . You should have told your story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great read!

Although it's not meant to, it had me so interested in the relationship and past story line that I had forgotten momentarily that its supposed to be an erotic story. I love how your writing flows and how it makes me empathize with both characters.

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