by RelentlessPerversion
RP, I hope you will do a sequel on Elizabeth & Eric (and her friends?)! I liked delving into a shadow side of erotica; the Goth was graphic but not gruesome. Your sensual, sexual descriptions are juicy hot; great characters & dialog. Excellent work.
Great intro, got me into the story quick. Very well written, liked the fact that you gave background info but started with something sexy. Made me cum 3xs...do it to me again. ;o)
- 26 F Kat -
A superb story with a heroine who feels disarmingly familiar. I love goth and metal clubs, the whole atmosphere brings out exactly these lusty feelings in me. I was hoping to write something along these lines myself... but I couldn't hope to match your work!
-Lucid-