All Comments on 'Bad Night'

In second paragraph with typo "read had sex".

I think what was meant was something like, "They both saw (had sex with) other people ..."

something like: They both saw (read: 'had sex') with other people

Anyway, enough of that - good story, LaurahW!

and ya it was a little difficult to sort out but I still hate it when Mr. Anonymous shows up to correct the use of the english language. I really think he should go to another stories program and give the rest of us a break.

I would like to read more from you but hope you make it a little longer next time.

The fact that there is little dialogue makes this even hotter. Love it!

A good friend is always hard when he finds you on a bad night lol

Nice read Laura. Felt the tingle. b