All Comments on 'Bad People'

That was very well done. The characters played well and the sex was hot. Keep up the good work.

Such vivid descriptions and interesting characters. More please!

Very well done return. Enough character information and details to 'see' them. Sex was intense, to the point and hot. 5 from me

This seem like something that could go on! Great story, plot and characters.

It's always a joy to read quality writing, where the author has put so much work into the story that the reader gets to just immerse themselves in the writing and enjoy. No stumbling, no clunky sentences. Everything just flowed so well.

Thank you.

Forget any religious meanings of the above but I gotta say that was right up with the most sensuous story on Lit.

Wow. Extraordinarily well-written. Thank you for sharing this. I would love to read more with these characters. So hot.

I had not expected this kind of depth from a story on here. The main character is an interesting study and I think this is worthy of a sequel.. or maybe even a longer work if you're up for it :)

Superb writing and characters. I wish there was a sequel. I so want to see Olivia with Griff.

...very interesting, all my favourite sex with good English to boot. 5 fucking stars.

Subtle and understated. Complex personalities without a rush to conventional resolution. Wonder who Griff would be 20 or 30 years on?

And so few comments. Literotica has so many hidden gems like this story and it’s splended author.

Chilley

I love the dialogue, "You don't like me."

"No," he said, hesitating before adding, "Sorry."

I agree with what chilleywilley and hectare have expressed. The author has a subtle way to describe the characters, especially Griff's persona. The reader's interest and sympathy where evoked. On the other hand there are enough 'blank spots on the map' to leave open different paths for the story to evolve. I read this whole thing with a modicum of suspense and compassion. I was let down in the end, but so what. This contribution is not only belonging into the category of written erotica, but it is deserving to be recognised as literature as well, in my two pennies worth opinion.

As good a piece as there has been on Literotica - character development, twists and turns in the plot, with lots of paths left for each reader to follow these people for him/herself

Great short story - well developed characters, plot twists and turns, the characters' futures lie in each reader's imagination - and the sex was first rate, too